Pitch Feedback

It took a couple of days to get through all of the pitches, which also meant as i had to do mine a week later i could look and learn from the other pitches and try to develop mine so i included all of the things i needed to.

I still however didn't manage to get a full anamatic as i would have liked, my timings wernt all there and i didn't have enough time during the weekend to add any sound.

After i had done my pitch and presentation i was told that having guns within the animation and aiming it for young children would be a problem. Guns are not seen as a good thing to promote. So i would either have to take them out or aim the animation at a different audience.

They also didn't think i had enough concept work done, but as concept is not one of my strong points i was not surprised by this comment.

They also thought that the timing to the piece would probably be longer then i thought, as letting time for the animation to breath would make the animation longer in length and time.

Other then that they believed i covered all the areas they needed to see, and i believe i presented it well.